Fireworks

Walt: 1. write a narrative

        2. use words to paint a picture.

        3. use tense

This story is about a young girl called Kelly.  Kelly actually found something that shouldn’t be there.  That was a red spots lighter.  Kelly didn’t know anything about lighter.  So she decided to play with it. It was so close that James stopped her from playing with it.

Tomorrow, it’s going to be Kelly’s final soccer game and it going to be fireworks day.  So mum decided for tomorrows night, they are going to do some fireworks just straight after Kelly’s game.  Mum was all excited and happy that Kelly is in the final.  So mum was hurried to do the fireworks for tomorrows night.  But mum dropped something that shouldn’t been left.  Then she just put everything into the box and the box were full of fireworks.

Next morning, Kelly woke up and she got ready for the final game but after she got ready she kicked her ball just right at the corner next to the bin and she reached and reached but all she could see was her ball and a lonely lighter.  She got the ball but she didn’t want to leave the lighter alone, so she decided to take with her.  But she didn’t know what to do with it so she started to play with it.

Mum screamed,”Kelly, are you ready?.”

“Yes, Mum” replied Kelly.  

Kelly ran fast as she could so she won’t be late like last time.  But first she quickly hid the lighter

They won! It was close 25 to Kelly’s team and 24 to Sam’s team.  It was a good game.

As soon as they came back, Kelly ran to find a hiding spot so she can have alone time with the lighter. It was getting dark and mum was getting ready for the fireworks. James walked and walked across the hallway but he could smell burn from Kelly’s room.  So James ran and ran to Kelly’s door and fast he opens it and stop Kelly from playing with the lighter and James took the lighter of Kelly and straight gave it to mum.  

Mum was shocked because she thought that she had the lighter and blame Kelly because she sneak into the room and saw some fireworks and took the lighter. But it was mum’s fault for being hurried. So they didn’t want to talk about it because it was a day for fireworks.  They started by counting 10 to “1. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1” Boom! Boom! there goes the fireworks.

  Theme: Be careful what you have because you might not know that one of your kids will find it and you’ll go wild.

Stuck in the Lion cage

Earlier in the beautiful day, Tainah and Junior decided to go to the Zoo. Tainah wanted to go to the Zoo because it was her birthday. So Junior just wanted her to be happy for her birthday.

They just went there to take a photo of a Lion because it’s seems that Tainah only had her camera. Tainah and Junior got there soon enough because she was really excited.

“Hey Junior we are here, I hope we have fun in the beautiful sunshine” said Tainah.
“I hope so or else we will get stick in the Zoo” replied Junior.
“Hey Junior, I can see the Lion and I also can see no zookeeper” screamed Tainah.
“Yeah me too, and what do you mean” asked Junior.
“Like can I go in the lion cage” said Tainah.
“OH NO” shouted Junior.

Look she is already in the cage. So quickly Junior followed Tainah. But they both got stuck in the Lion cage.

When, Tainah and Junior shout out for help, the zookeeper came to rescue them. Tainah and Junior were free.

“Yipee” shouted Tainah and Junior.

Before they left, they took a photo with the Lion. Tainah was so happy because that was the 1st time taking a photo of a Lion.

“This is my happiest birthday I ever had” shouted Tainah.

But the problem that she won’t go in the cage without asking, she is not gonna do that again she promised. All because she thought she is gonna die but lucky she got saved.  

She was so scared and she said to Junior” she doesn’t wants to go there again.

It's my bread

Once upon a time there were 3 birds. Junior was the older brother.  

Junior is as fast as a pig because he is fast but fat like a pig. Johnny is the little bird he is pretty but smelly because he is scared of water like a little ant. The mother Tainah she is slow as a panda because she is slow like a turtle but big as a panda.

“Junior and Johnny come on we are going to the Glen Innes ground because I’m hungry and you are hungry too Right?” shouted Tainah.
“Wait don’t forget me I’m also hungry too” shouted Johnny.
“And me” shouted Junior.

Tainah took the 2 little birds, so they can look for their food for the 1st time. She took them to Glen Innes grounds where all the birds found food when people threw their food away.

Johnny and Junior saw a big piece of bread but it had been bitten from a person. They quickly went down. Junior and Johnny started a fight for the big food because they were hungry.  

Tainah had a plan when they nearly had a fight, Tainah cut the bread into 2 pieces.

So they started eating their food but Mum was still trying to find herself food.  

“Hey boy you got any left overs for me please Johnny” asked Tainah.
“Sorry mum but there are no leftovers, maybe Junior has leftovers ask him” Johnny said.
“Oh ok I’ll ask him” said Tainah.
“Hey Junior do you have any leftovers please Junior” said Tainah.
“Yes I do mum I have some leftovers for you, here you are”  shouted Junior.
“Oh thanks Junior, Oh finally” replied Tainah.  

Tainah was so happy because all thanks to Junior that he had leftovers for his mother. Tainah was so hungry but, after she finished her bread she said ”Oh I’m still hungry”.

“Hahaha” the 2 little birds were starting to laugh because it was very funny, that Tainah was still hungry.