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Wednesday, 18 September 2013

Smelly boy


Walt: write a story with a theme” always take care of your skin”

There was a big boy called Willy Wonka and he’s pretty ugly and smelly.  While, he never had a shower even though he’s mum told him.  Willy Wonkas mum was too upset when she told him how many times to go for a shower.  So she never bother to.   

Willy never wanted to hope into the shower and he always touches germs, diseases and he does feel itchy, like all the time.  He look like the monster that just came from the jungle but While few days ago, he was very sick, unhealthy and ugly.  So he ran from GI centre worst.  He always gets hurt and thinks that he got the power to heal problems, while No!.  Everyone never wanted to be his friend but he never cares.  He never wanted to be clean and smell nice and fresh but all he was, was the opposite.

to home, and he screamed” Mum Mum! “.  While mum wasn’t home, so he was so badly sick.  So in 20 seconds Willy ran fast to the hospital like Usain bolt.  He got there and screamed” Help Help “. So a nurse came to help and her name was Miss Clear.  Miss clear asked” what happen “ and Willy Wonka said” I’m badly sick, please help me I don’t want to die“ and Miss Clear said” Yes!, I’ll help you and No! you won’t die, you came at the right time so well done and you do look really bad and smelly”.

So Miss Clear gave him water then told him to go to sleep, then gave him a infections to make him better. While she notices that he really smells so bad, so he really need to go for a good shower.  So as soon Willy woke up his mum was holding his hand so tightly and Mum told him if you don’t go shower, you know you’ll get even worst.  So Mum took him home and took his medicine and then Mum went to get some food.  Willy went to hoop in the shower and got some soap and then turn on the shower.  He wiped his body as clean as its done then got his towel and dry his body for 15 minutes then put some clothes on.  While when he was done he looked smart and cool and smells better than before.  So when mum came back she was very spires for him and happily after they ate together as a mum and son.

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