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Tuesday 4 December 2012

Netbook Reflection 2012

I love my netbook.  Let me tell you why I love my netbook.

Netbook helps me learn stuff like maths.  I love maths that why I love my netbook. It's so much fun to learn maths or games on your netbook because my netbook is the best.  My netbook is so special, I'll give you 4 reason why. It's because my netbook makes connections to people, 

I learn how to positive ,I learn to share my work and create fun things.  To be honest, on my netbook it's so much fun to work with.

I love my netbook.  Do you love your netbook?





Monday 3 December 2012

Stuck in the Lion cage

Earlier in the beautiful day, Tainah and Junior decided to go to the Zoo. Tainah wanted to go to the Zoo because it was her birthday. So Junior just wanted her to be happy for her birthday.

They just went there to take a photo of a Lion because it’s seems that Tainah only had her camera. Tainah and Junior got there soon enough because she was really excited.

“Hey Junior we are here, I hope we have fun in the beautiful sunshine” said Tainah.
“I hope so or else we will get stick in the Zoo” replied Junior.
“Hey Junior, I can see the Lion and I also can see no zookeeper” screamed Tainah.
“Yeah me too, and what do you mean” asked Junior.
“Like can I go in the lion cage” said Tainah.
“OH NO” shouted Junior.

Look she is already in the cage. So quickly Junior followed Tainah. But they both got stuck in the Lion cage.

When, Tainah and Junior shout out for help, the zookeeper came to rescue them. Tainah and Junior were free.

“Yipee” shouted Tainah and Junior.

Before they left, they took a photo with the Lion. Tainah was so happy because that was the 1st time taking a photo of a Lion.

“This is my happiest birthday I ever had” shouted Tainah.

But the problem that she won’t go in the cage without asking, she is not gonna do that again she promised. All because she thought she is gonna die but lucky she got saved.  

She was so scared and she said to Junior” she doesn’t wants to go there again.

It's my bread

Once upon a time there were 3 birds. Junior was the older brother.  

Junior is as fast as a pig because he is fast but fat like a pig. Johnny is the little bird he is pretty but smelly because he is scared of water like a little ant. The mother Tainah she is slow as a panda because she is slow like a turtle but big as a panda.

“Junior and Johnny come on we are going to the Glen Innes ground because I’m hungry and you are hungry too Right?” shouted Tainah.
“Wait don’t forget me I’m also hungry too” shouted Johnny.
“And me” shouted Junior.

Tainah took the 2 little birds, so they can look for their food for the 1st time. She took them to Glen Innes grounds where all the birds found food when people threw their food away.

Johnny and Junior saw a big piece of bread but it had been bitten from a person. They quickly went down. Junior and Johnny started a fight for the big food because they were hungry.  

Tainah had a plan when they nearly had a fight, Tainah cut the bread into 2 pieces.

So they started eating their food but Mum was still trying to find herself food.  

“Hey boy you got any left overs for me please Johnny” asked Tainah.
“Sorry mum but there are no leftovers, maybe Junior has leftovers ask him” Johnny said.
“Oh ok I’ll ask him” said Tainah.
“Hey Junior do you have any leftovers please Junior” said Tainah.
“Yes I do mum I have some leftovers for you, here you are”  shouted Junior.
“Oh thanks Junior, Oh finally” replied Tainah.  

Tainah was so happy because all thanks to Junior that he had leftovers for his mother. Tainah was so hungry but, after she finished her bread she said ”Oh I’m still hungry”.

“Hahaha” the 2 little birds were starting to laugh because it was very funny, that Tainah was still hungry.

Monday 17 September 2012

The Surprise of our Netbook

14 September 2012

WALT: write a procedure.

Dear Mr Hendricks

In my opinion, I strongly believe, NO, I will convince you to believe me that we should take our netbook home.

Mr Hendricks, Room 9 and I would love to take our netbooks home. O
nly if you agree.  If you don’t have any ideas why Room 9 and I should take our netbook home, then let me give examples of why we should take our netbook home because we have a lot of learning to do. Let me tell you what I am learning. I am learning how to spell, to do maths like basic facts, also writing and reading. NOW that is important because reading is like understanding more things, talking properly and being able to read more books.

From the reasons above, I question whether you will allow us to take our netbook home. That is why I must convince you to let us to take our netbooks home. For example, Room 9 and I love our netbooks because If we love our netbook then we love learning too. Also Including, If we love our netbook then we love our netbook and nothing bad will happen to our netbook.

I strongly believe that we can take our netbook home because we have no home work. How am I supposed to learn without homework. Since I know my netbook is special to me, then I can learn more things from my netbook because my netbook has everything.

Netbooks are fun and easy nothing is hard just easy because everyone loves to learn like me, so if you allow us to take our netbook. You know, the more we take our netbook, the more we learn.

To be honest, Room 9 and I agree to take our netbook home because we are ready and if you don’t agree, someday I can take your daughter to school from home. Then after school I can take her back home or clean your car or clean your house, your garden, your washing and your shoes. I’m a good girl don't you think? If you think I am a good girl can we take our netbook home PLEASE.

For instance, If we forgot something to do for our schoold work then we can do that at home with our netbook. We don’t want to waste our time writing in our books that is because you have to walk there and walk back home, so no time to do that .  

As evidence, instead using books you can do everything in your netbooks because your netbooks have everything inside it, so it is that easy. In my support of this I would like to continue learning at home.

Furthermore, you don’t want us to waste our money on books because if you buy books then you have to buy a book every time. When you are finished your book. It looks “boring". In fact, we love learning, if we love learning then we can learn more “right”? yes, I agree and I hope you agree too.

Mr Hendricks, Room 9 and I ask you to allow us to take our netbooks home because ROOM 9 AND I ARE IN LOVE WITH OUR NETBOOKS.  

In my conclusion, I love my netbook very much. Please give me a chance to take my netbook home because I’m in love with my netbook. Mr Hendricks, don't forget I love learning. In my opinion, as you can see, I hope you let us take our netbook home.

Last but not least, it is my dream to take it home. So PLEASE Mr Hendricks we are begging you if we can take our netbooks home we can improve that we can get better by learning on our netbooks. PLEASE, PLEASE Mr Hendricks can we take our netbook home I am begging you. Just Room 9 can take their netbook home. Of course we are begging you because we have nothing to do just playing and NO learning. Thank you.

Basketball is the best

Argument
Mr. Hendricks

In Room 9, I bet I can do much better in the Olympic Sport and I bet I can put a smile on your face and make you happy, like that has never happened to you.

I have to go to the Olympics 2012 because:

To be honest I would love to compete in Basketball because all my life I have been waiting for this. Mr Hendricks please take me to London where the Olympic Sport is so I can compete in Basketball.


Mr Hendricks, I can do anything for you, let me explain. I can take your dog for a walk, clean your house or clean Glen Innes School. I can make you a special dinner or you can just take me to London where the Olympics are held.
Mr Hendricks, I Want to go to the Olympics because I strongly believe that I want to compete in Basketball because I love Basketball and I practiced Basketball skills for 1 month and I think i'm ready for it.  

Mr Hendricks, I want to play Basketball for the Olympics because it makes me fit.

I hope, I get the medal for Glen Innes School.  Mr Hendricks don’t you want a medal for Glen Innes School?

Mr. send me to the Olympics to play Basketball and I wish that we can win the medal for Glen Innes School. Send me to London where the Olympics are held. So please Mr Hendricks send me there because it is easy for me and easy for Glen Innes School.

I hope, I'm your best child in Glen Innes School. I'm your star student.

Tuesday 7 August 2012

A Special Day.

Dear Dad

It was a special day for Rm 9, 11 and 12.  I was so happy and excited when I stepped in the hall.  In the hall, there were balloons, music and there were so many, lovely parents to support us and our netbook.  

Our special netbook, help us because we work a lot and we are moving it  on.  Netbook help us to allow research on internet.  It help us because we can share our learning. Also it helps us to learn more things and more words.  

Thank you, Dad for spending your money on my netbook and I want to say thank you very much for my amazing netbook.  Dad, I’m learning more things and words on my lovely netbook.  I enjoyed spending time with my netbook and I hope I can spend some time with you because you have spend time, spending your money on my awesome netbook.  I love you dad.

Your  Daughter
Tainah