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Friday, 25 October 2013

Claudia and Tainah's trip


Walt: to write a narrative

Watching the sea going over one another.  Looking at the bird on the tree singing.  Eating my food made me full. It was delicious and tasty but going for a swim made me cold.  “ Hey, Tainah “said Claudia. “ Hey, Claudia “said Tainah.  “ It’s a wonderful day, don’t you think “ smiled Tainah.  “ Look up the mountain “ says Claudia.  Tainah said “ do you want to go for a walk onto the mountain “ Yeah sure, what are we waiting for come on lets go “said Claudia.


So they reached to the top of the mountain. They found a spot to sit and next to them there was a stone to cook so they decided to cook sausages and paddy.  So they, ate there sausages and paddy.  Well they enjoy their time so it was going late so they packed and started to walk.  So they walk 135 metres away where they were.  But something was burning and as you can see up in the sky Claudia and Tainah could she the fire.  “ look, up the trees they are burning “ said Tainah.  “ I know, I can see that “said Claudia.  


“ Oh, no Tainah you forgot to turn off the stone “ said Claudia.  “ That’s right, what are we going to do “said Tainah.  So they think and think but they still couldn’t come up with an idea.  “ Tainah do you have your phone “said Claudia.  “ No, sorry I didn’t brought it because I thought that i might wet it “ said Tainah.  “Oh, no” said Claudia.  So they found someone that has a huge and long hose. “ Well, hello handsome, will you please help me “ said Claudia.  Tainah said” you meant us “ “Yeah, thats what I meant, sorry!” said Claudia.   Tainah, Claudia and Pakii were carrying it to the tree and started to hoses it. Lucky it was on 3 trees that were on fired.  “Oh heres my phone “said Tainah.  “Tainah!, well lucky we found this handsome man” said Claudia.  “ Well, thank you “said Pakii.


Next time Tainah should remember to turn off the stone after when they finished using it.  But lucky they are still alive.  Well at least Claudia found someone in her life.

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