Walt: write a persuasive speech.
A mouthguard is a protective device to keep our teeth safe. A mouthguard is mandatory to sports. So really you have no choice. Sports that will prevent damage to their teeth will really need a mouthguard. Wearing a mouthguard is not just to protect your teeth, but also your lips, cheeks and your tongue.
Needing a mouth guard is very important because really you don’t want to lose your teeth. So if you were smart enough you will choose to wear a mouthguard, so nothing will damage the part of your teeth. The good thing is that it doesn’t cost a lot but if you go to the dentist it may cost around $200 or more.
The best time to wear mouthguard is when you play sports like hockey, softball, rugby, league, boxing and soccer. All of these sport are related to hard out playing, which can cause an injury. People don’t always feel hurt, but they can have also have a sad feeling.
I strongly believe that mouthguard is a protective device so the best thing for kids safety, the school should add mouthguard to their list because teacher wouldn’t like to see anyone get hurt because its not their job to care.
2 comments:
Kia Ora Tainah :)
I love your persuasive story, it is really persuasive, and that is the point of a persuasive story. Was it hard finding proof for your reasons? Keep it up Tainah, good girl. :)
Hello Tainah,
Your persuasive story is good. It made me want to wear a mouthguard. If you keep writing persuasive stories like this, you might make people who read your stories might compare you to other authors. How long did it take to find the information?
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