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Friday 14 February 2014

Explanation: Swimming


Walt: explain what is done before swimming.

In Glen Innes School, children bring their togs and towels everyday for their swimming lessons because they have a swimming pool.

First, the children get their togs and goggles to swim in, because wearing togs instead of clothes is really easy to swim in and clothes are really hard for children to swim. It will be too heavy.

Next, the children go into the changing room, so they can change into their togs because you need to have the right gear on to swim.

After that, the children head to the swimming pool but before they get into the pool they need to have a shower so the chlorine won’t burn their skin.

Then, the children can hop into the pool but they have to enter the pool by the ladder. Only so they will know if it is deep or not.

Finally, they get to swim in the pool because swimming is one of the best sport or because they want to swim when its a hot day.

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Good afternoon tainah I like the words you been using for your explanation writing and I like the words then that after and all the other words on your explanation.

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