Fireworks

Walt: 1. write a narrative

        2. use words to paint a picture.

        3. use tense

This story is about a young girl called Kelly.  Kelly actually found something that shouldn’t be there.  That was a red spots lighter.  Kelly didn’t know anything about lighter.  So she decided to play with it. It was so close that James stopped her from playing with it.

Tomorrow, it’s going to be Kelly’s final soccer game and it going to be fireworks day.  So mum decided for tomorrows night, they are going to do some fireworks just straight after Kelly’s game.  Mum was all excited and happy that Kelly is in the final.  So mum was hurried to do the fireworks for tomorrows night.  But mum dropped something that shouldn’t been left.  Then she just put everything into the box and the box were full of fireworks.

Next morning, Kelly woke up and she got ready for the final game but after she got ready she kicked her ball just right at the corner next to the bin and she reached and reached but all she could see was her ball and a lonely lighter.  She got the ball but she didn’t want to leave the lighter alone, so she decided to take with her.  But she didn’t know what to do with it so she started to play with it.

Mum screamed,”Kelly, are you ready?.”

“Yes, Mum” replied Kelly.  

Kelly ran fast as she could so she won’t be late like last time.  But first she quickly hid the lighter

They won! It was close 25 to Kelly’s team and 24 to Sam’s team.  It was a good game.

As soon as they came back, Kelly ran to find a hiding spot so she can have alone time with the lighter. It was getting dark and mum was getting ready for the fireworks. James walked and walked across the hallway but he could smell burn from Kelly’s room.  So James ran and ran to Kelly’s door and fast he opens it and stop Kelly from playing with the lighter and James took the lighter of Kelly and straight gave it to mum.  

Mum was shocked because she thought that she had the lighter and blame Kelly because she sneak into the room and saw some fireworks and took the lighter. But it was mum’s fault for being hurried. So they didn’t want to talk about it because it was a day for fireworks.  They started by counting 10 to “1. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1” Boom! Boom! there goes the fireworks.

  Theme: Be careful what you have because you might not know that one of your kids will find it and you’ll go wild.