Music

Walt: 1.  write a narrative

        2.  to focus on paragraphs

This is a story about three girls who took someone else’s performance and decided to use it for their performances.

The bell rung and rung.  All students were crazy in the hallway.  A lonely girl was left in the hallway.  Well actually, she was new.  Her name is Claudia.  She’s a talented girl and she sang like a bird on a tree.  Across the hallway

Claudia screamed, “Hey, can you help me?”

Claudia ran fast like Usain Bolt.

“How do you get to Room 11?” asked Claudia.  

“Well go straight and turn left and you're there.” answered Pakii.  

“Thank you,” smiled Claudia.  His name is Pakii.  Pakii is  talented at singing but also good at playing  the guitar.

Claudia was welcomed  to Room 11.  She was pretty nervous but she  tried and got along. She sat on her desk with gums underneath and dirt on top.   On the wall there was a post and it says “If you're talented come along and try out on GI go talent”.  Claudia smiled and decided to give it a try.  So GI got talent is on this Saturday night but at 6.30pm.  Every single day she sings but she decided for her talent she is going to dance.  The last time she danced was when she was 13 years old.  She gave up because work and study was important because mum and dad didn’t like the music. That wasn’t their thing.  So they got upset and it was all up to Claudia. If she want to study or give up and dance. But Claudia decided to quit dancing but she sings.

One day, the three girls were walking and walking past Claudia’s house.  They heard music from Claudia’s place. So the girls watched and watched.

Two more days until GI got talent.  You could hear the music that got really into your bones.  She danced like a hip pop star.  Whenever, she practiced dancing the girls were watching every move and act that she owned. It was hard for Claudia because she trained and worked hard for this talent show.

The show started at 6.30 pm. Claudia was nervous as she watching everyone’s performance and none of the people made in. The girls were on stage. Wow! They dance, they smile and they were happy.  But someone wasn’t happy. Claudia cried. But there was only one thing for Claudia to performance. Claudia sang her song and everyone were happy and clapping.  It was fantastic. It was amazing and she won the prize.  Claudia was happy.  As soon she got home Mum and Dad know that she was going to win because of her beautiful voice.  

Its is not good to steal someone else’s performance.  It’s good to make your own performance because you might not know if you will win or not, If you did steal someone’s performance you might not know that theres another talent that shes also good at.